Improving blog comments

This is something I did in Cybersmart. What we had to do was that we had to take a screenshot of a blog comment that we could add onto it and make an improvement and then we had to post it on our blogs.

This is how I improved this I added something that was positive helpful and a question.

Blog Profile DLO 2019

Hello everyone I have done a video about myself take a look enjoy looking at my blog!

Summer Learning Journey - back drain

Hi bloggers today I had to find two polluted rivers in New Zealand  take a look↴

⁕ Waitara River (Taranaki)
⁕ Tukituki River ( Hawkes Bay)

Summer Learning Journey - recipe ingredients

Hi bloggers
Today I am going to share the ingredients for one of my favourire foods Lasagne

Ingredients

Lasagne pasta sheets
pasata sauce
mince
grated carrot and zuchini

Cheese sauce
butter
milk
flour
cheese

YumYum

Summer Learning Journey - devil's bath

Hi bloggers today I did the activity about Rotorua I thought of 3 names the whould describe Rotorua's
Devil's bath take a look↓

1. Kakariki (green) still water

2. Shreks pool

3. Green eggs and ham bath

Summer Learning Journey - summer activities

Today on the summer learning journey we had to do what we liked best to do in the summer

have a look↓

I  like going to Rotorua and making a hut 

and playing with my dogs.

I like being outside to play because I can play with my cousins and I make huts, explore and have fun.

Summer Learning Journey - footprint

I did a footprint of what you should and shouldent post online
take a look↓