We have been doing the first SLJ week for our last days of school.
I made a poster about what I would take if I had to choose 10 thing that I would take on a voyage and you don't have a frige or a frezzer. I have listed 10 ideas that I choose but was hard to choose.
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Kia ora Erana, I hope you are having a groovy day so far!
ReplyDeleteThank you for doing week one, day one, activity one. I love how you’ve made a poster - it makes your post more creative and eye-catching! I also like the bright colours you’ve used and the images. The food items you’ve listed sound delicious. I also like how you’ve explained why you would take them, instead of just listing them. I would definitely take water and chocolate too!
What are your top two favourite meals? Mine are nachos and roast chicken :) Have you ever spent time in a canoe or kayak?
Next time you use images from the internet, make sure you attribute the image - this just means copy the link from where you found the image and put it next to the image on the poster, so we can see exactly where you found it :)
Thanks for posting! I look forward to reading more of your posts over the summer.
Have a great Tuesday!
Eliza :)
Hi Erana
ReplyDeleteMy name is Allie and I am the Cluster Manager for the Summer Learning Journey in Toki Pounamu which is in Greymouth, on the West Coast of the South Island. A long way from where you are!
Well done for completing your first every post on the SLJ. It is really colourful and eye catching. You really have made a great job of it.
I really like that you have created some of the images yourself. These are just awesome.
I am so pleased that you would take water with you, this would be most important as you would need lots of fresh water to drink.
Great work Erana, I look forward to reading more of your work over the summer.
Until next time
Allie :)